http://freedrp.darkbb.com/characters-f3/-t1.htm Get feedback on characters that you have made. Thu, 03 Jul 2008 18:20:27 GMT 10 http://illiweb.com/fa/saphic/logo.gif http://freedrp.darkbb.com/characters-f3/-t1.htm http://freedrp.darkbb.com/characters-f3/critique-aster-s-intros-t33.htm xStarr_x3 You heard me right. =3 I want her intros critiqued. I have three of them for her: DNA, Gifted, and normal. I'll put them below. DNA;; A tousled head of curls pulled free of a ramshackle blanket, blinking blood-shot ice-blue eyes in the early morning glare of the sun's rays. The teen had a tired, pale face, splattered with a faint trace of freckles that had been put there by the sun. Her eyes blinked, once, twice; adjusting themselves to the lightening in the gloomy-looking room. ... Characters Thu, 03 Jul 2008 18:20:27 GMT http://freedrp.darkbb.com/characters-f3/critique-aster-s-intros-t33.htm#49 http://freedrp.darkbb.com/characters-f3/critique-aster-s-intros-t33.htm http://freedrp.darkbb.com/characters-f3/the-seven-muses-medieval-or-modern-fantasy-t29.htm Zetta 1. Nynn/Nin, Muse of Astronomy 2. Ansel, Muse of Music 3. Leon, Muse of History 4. Lexas, Muse of Mechanics 5. Crypt, Muse of Poetry 6. Max, Muse of Comedy 7. Finn, Muse of Tragedy Each Muse has a Pure form. Generally, their appearance and clothing changes, as well as letting them unlock their full powers. In some cases, their Pure form has an animal companion, though in recent years the 'animals' have become objects, such as Ansel's fireflies becoming glowsticks. Mostly ... Characters Wed, 02 Jul 2008 16:40:31 GMT http://freedrp.darkbb.com/characters-f3/the-seven-muses-medieval-or-modern-fantasy-t29.htm#30 http://freedrp.darkbb.com/characters-f3/the-seven-muses-medieval-or-modern-fantasy-t29.htm